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your_demonic_angel

Joined: 02 Dec 2006 Posts: 46
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:18 pm Post subject: Hidden Sorrow (Tsuzuki Centric) |
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This is in Tsuzuki's POV
Hidden Sorrow
A Tsuzuki Centric Poem
I long to be the same
Although I know it's better to be different
I just want someone to love
And to hold my empty, sad soul
All my sorrow
Hidden behind a fragile smile
I long to be the same
But no one pays enough attention
I long to be the same
So much as death
I'll do what I can
To be accepted by man
My eyes are different
My heart is too
I'm not like the others
I'll be there for you
I'll protect you, Hisoka
I'll do what I can
Just please don't leave me
Not leave me alone again
You changed me and
Made me feel accepted
Yet it's so hard to love you
When you're just as cold
I've always wanted a friend
You offered that to me
Now's my chance
To return the favor to you... _________________ To get a taste of my new YnM fanfiction "Don't Trust Anyone", PM me and I'll send you the first and second paragraph of the first chapter. To get the rest, well...You'll just have to wait till I'm done.
Last edited by your_demonic_angel on Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:34 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Jani_chan

Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 2685
Location: Enma's bed
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:27 pm Post subject: |
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Oh wows, you're truly amazing, Midnight. I love your poetry^^ I've always been able to really understand Tsuzuki because I'm most like him. I used to think it was Hisoka, but I'm definitly more Tsuzuki^^
I feel your words in this poem. I know how Tsuzuki feels here, so it touches my heart.
Very well written, my dear. Very nice^^ I look forward to reading more of your poetry as time goes on^^ |
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laustic

Joined: 09 Jul 2006 Posts: 660
Location: Florida
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 2:38 pm Post subject: |
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What a pretty poem You certainly have a talent for poetry. I can't wait to read more.
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