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Jani_chan
Joined: 23 Aug 2006
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 Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:48 pm Post subject: Hiding |
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Hiding.
Hiding everything.
Hiding the things I love,
And the fact that I love them.
Hiding the tears I don't want to cry.
Hiding the fact that I wish I would die.
Hiding the darkness I feel in my heart.
Hiding my feelings right from the start.
Hiding.
Hiding everything.
Hiding me.
((this could be either Hiji or Soka...you decide)) |
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Hikari no Tenshi
Joined: 02 Dec 2006
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Location: bubblegum land
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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I like this alot, your really good at writing poems, sorry i haven't been on in forever, my fault. Anyway I think this can apply more for Hijiri. I don't know why but i can see him saying this or thinking it. Though Hisoka fits it pretty well too ^^.
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laustic
Joined: 09 Jul 2006
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Location: Florida
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| Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 1:30 pm Post subject: |
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| That's a well written poem. I think it really fits Hisoka to the T. |
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| Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 7:21 pm Post subject: |
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| Hikari no Tenshi wrote: | | I like this alot, your really good at writing poems, sorry i haven't been on in forever, my fault. Anyway I think this can apply more for Hijiri. I don't know why but i can see him saying this or thinking it. Though Hisoka fits it pretty well too ^^. |
Really? I immediately thought Hisoka, especially after learning he's name means secrect.
I just re-read it and realised that, oh yea, this could be applied to Hijiri I think when he's first just got he's new eye maybe, before he tries to kill himself. But I've never seen Hijiri as a "hider", for lack of a better word, even when he's TOLD to hide for he's own safety and that of Kazusa's he still didn't hide. Not unless one was to look at he's character at a completely different angle and surmise him as someone who's cheer and determination compensates a weakness, and masks it.
Oh yea, btw, good poem, ^^;; I think I ranted there, the rhythm as well is also very good.
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