My Perfect Doll (MurakiXHisoka, dark poem)

your_demonic_angel · Joined: 02 Dec 2006 Posts: 46

My Perfect Doll
A Muraki and Hisoka dark poem

Hello my perfect doll, yes I'm watching you
Nothing is different, yet nothing is the same
Yet, I still want you

They say save the best for last
But I can never resist
You're too perfect my little one
And you, I surely will miss

Not struggle, it's too hard
To keep the marks under control
It's painful I know, but I still won't let you go

You saw what you shouldn't have
You were there at the wrong time
If it wasn't for that
Maybe you would have survived

Ssh, my perfect doll
This won't be our last meeting
I'll see you once again
When you're down and bleeding

Don't run away, don't run to him
He can never protect you

Don't struggle, don't scream
You'll only be more miserable

I love you my doll, I'll never let you go
That's why your here again,
In death's hands...
You'll never go
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laustic · Joined: 09 Jul 2006 Posts: 660 Location: Florida

Another excellant poem. I love the language in here. It's so dark, promising and menacing. I think it really hits on the "relationship" between the two.

your_demonic_angel · Joined: 02 Dec 2006 Posts: 46

I have another one describing Muraki and Hisoka, but it's from Hisoka's POV. I might put it up.
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Jani_chan · Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 2685 Location: Enma's bed

Please please please please do^^ I love your poems^^ They are wonderful^^ I absolutivly adore thems^^ *more huggles*

your_demonic_angel · Joined: 02 Dec 2006 Posts: 46

I just posted the sequel to this: Wounded Soul, Fragile Doll

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To get a taste of my new YnM fanfiction "Don't Trust Anyone", PM me and I'll send you the first and second paragraph of the first chapter. To get the rest, well...You'll just have to wait till I'm done.