Pointless poems of the mind.

Chazmy · Last edited by Chazmy on Sun Dec 23, 2007 11:05 pm; edited 1 time in total

just some very short poems I had written in my stories.

Broken Angel:

I have left these damaged jewels for you.

amoung them I lay shattered to pieces.

you could cure them with glue

but I will still remain broken.

{ this was written in my *Skeletons in the Closet* story. It is based on Muraki and his mother }

We are the Same:

Black and White

A beautiful disparity.

A compliment to eachother.

Both sharing strengh and power.

Neither can win over the other.

For both to share is to be..

...equal

...mutual

the color of gray.

{ ofcourse is about Tsuzuki and Muraki }

Final Wish:

Not again, not to awake in this feeling.

depressed, emotional, angry, terrified, hurt.

DEATH

an open invitation, my arms stretched far and wide.

consume me, coax my body in that bitter numb haven so that I may not feel nomore.

there is no coming back she said

correct and I will not come back without him.

There is only one thing left to do...

Pour brûler les restes. { means: to burn away the remains }

{ I wrote this poem in my *Forever Mine* story. It is about Tsuzuki preparing to kill himself for the loss of his love }
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laustic · Joined: 09 Jul 2006 Posts: 660 Location: Florida

These are well written poems. I enjoyed reading them. I think the first one is my favorite. It just seems to fit Muraki and his mother so well.

Chazmy · Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 7:34 pm Post subject:

Thank You

^_^
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Jani_chan · Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 2685 Location: Enma's bed

I agree with Laustic wholeheartedly. Very nice!

Chazmy · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:51 pm Post subject:

Thank you:D

I was hoping they weren't to wacked out O_o
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laustic · Joined: 09 Jul 2006 Posts: 660 Location: Florida

Your poems are definitely not wacked. I think they're dark and beautiful.

Chazmy · Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:19 pm Post subject:

Thank You ^_^

I always think that people can't understand them, to scriptive.
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Editor · Joined: 07 Jul 2006 Posts: 330

I like the passion of the last one but I agree with laustic, despite being ths shortest the first one has an eerieness to it that leaves a lingering impression on you. The last three lines of the second one too, especially laid in that format, I thought were very well done.
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Chazmy · Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 4:06 am Post subject:

Thank you:) I'll have more up soon.

there was a short one i did do not to long ago:

Guardian

My protection

My scar

When things go bad

There you are

I close my eyes

And see your face

To block out those nightmares

To a imaginary place.

You will protect me

My guardian angel

You will heal my wounds

Scare away the shadows...

You will tell me it’s okay

Just by looking into your eyes

I will give in to my fears

And tear away the lies

{ This poem was broken down more in the story ' Skeletons in the Closet ". This is it in short . based on Young Muraki and Tsuzuki. ]
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Editor · Joined: 07 Jul 2006 Posts: 330

Sounds romantic with a mysterious quality to it. The "wills" give it a lot of impact and certainty as well, so does the opening contradicting lines;