Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 5:06 pm Post subject: [personal space is actually objective]
Well, I was dodging fandom for a long while, but someone I've been actively talking to for the past three or four years has pulled me back in.
This fic was spawned by the idea of personal space invasion at one in the morning, and how Hisoka is the key holder of stocks in "PERSONAL SPACE NOW."
It is all her fault. I blame her exclusively.
Anyway, I have come to link you, because it: A) Connects you all to my new LJ, B) Connects you to the story via the LJ.
Anyway, on with the linkage:
title: in which personal space is divided and conquered (or how hisoka deals with the fact he's inevitably falling for someone or how tsuzuki breaks barriers with no particular coherency, but hisoka lets him because he's an idiot and he (might secretly like him a little bit) tolerate him more if he did or get out of my head, my dreams, and otherwise my system, please.) series: Yami no Matsuei.
rating: PG-13 to R.
pairing: Tsuzuki and Hisoka. Roles switch, people.
word count: 3,224. (Fifteen parts.)
summary: Hisoka discovers that personal space is really very objective.
Really lovely story. The descriptions are so full and vivid and detailed, especially touch, the ghostly nature of touch, the lighting, like in the bathroom, and how you intermingle the senses, like sound and colour, it really brings the story to life, and you were very honest in your portrayal of Hisoka and Tsuzuki's nature and I loved how much Tsuzuki's reply to why he hadn't slept in he's bed in awhile carried so much weight, *sighs* that shimigami. _________________
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Really lovely story. The descriptions are so full and vivid and detailed, especially touch, the ghostly nature of touch, the lighting, like in the bathroom, and how you intermingle the senses, like sound and colour, it really brings the story to life, and you were very honest in your portrayal of Hisoka and Tsuzuki's nature and I loved how much Tsuzuki's reply to why he hadn't slept in he's bed in awhile carried so much weight, *sighs* that shimigami.
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Thank you. I mean, really. Thank you. I've been attempting to perfect a couple effects in my writing, and through my completion of my second novel (I think I neglected to mention it?), I was hoping it would come across, here. I think it might have, and for that I am really reassured. [:
Haha. Funny you mention that part. I think I gained the most amusement from writing that line than any other, because I can't imagine Tsuzuki responding any other way. Even in the face of something so serious. <3
Also, I'm glad the honesty seeped through. I try my hardest to submit something that feels realistic, and I rather pride myself in it. I like the nitty-gritty emotions. I like honest physical descriptions. (Like, when a person fights? Geez. I have so much fun with that on the sheer principle that I can make them ugly and beautiful at once.)
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oh wow! Your wording is exquisite and this is amazing! SOOO amazing! just wow! I love when Hisoka leans on his arm to smell Tsuzuki. Sooo cute!
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Thank you. Really. I'm boggling a bit, actually. [:
Hahaha. I always loved the idea of people smelling clothes just because it picked up the scent of another person. I mean, I picked it for the sheer reason that it was discreet, easy for him to do, and something that can be repeated too often (and thus be picked up on). Besides, I have fun twisting the cliche of smelling clothing around. Why not have him pick the scent on his own clothes, you know? The boy's perceptive. <3
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Seconded.
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