Jani_chan
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Beautifully monstrouslol it's stupid, but it's something of Tsu/Mu
Beautifully monstrous.
Sinful and sadistic.
Peircing eyes of platinum
Stabbing at my heart.
Touches all unwanted
Yet needed all the same
What am I to do when
You set my heart aflame?
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Editor
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I love the contrasts, and the last two lines really hit home, though my favourite lines were:
Touches all unwanted
Yet needed all the same
Genius!!
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Jani_chan
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thank you. I thought it was stupid XD;;;;
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Editor
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Not at all!! Well done!! *huggles poem and Jani*
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Jani_chan
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yey! *ist huggled*
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Editor
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Huggling is fuun!
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