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Jani_chan
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HidingHiding.
Hiding everything.
Hiding the things I love,
And the fact that I love them.
Hiding the tears I don't want to cry.
Hiding the fact that I wish I would die.
Hiding the darkness I feel in my heart.
Hiding my feelings right from the start.
Hiding.
Hiding everything.
Hiding me.
((this could be either Hiji or Soka...you decide))
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Hikari no Tenshi
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I like this alot, your really good at writing poems, sorry i haven't been on in forever, my fault. Anyway I think this can apply more for Hijiri. I don't know why but i can see him saying this or thinking it. Though Hisoka fits it pretty well too ^^.
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laustic
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That's a well written poem. I think it really fits Hisoka to the T.
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Editor
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| Hikari no Tenshi wrote: | | I like this alot, your really good at writing poems, sorry i haven't been on in forever, my fault. Anyway I think this can apply more for Hijiri. I don't know why but i can see him saying this or thinking it. Though Hisoka fits it pretty well too ^^. |
Really? I immediately thought Hisoka, especially after learning he's name means secrect.
I just re-read it and realised that, oh yea, this could be applied to Hijiri I think when he's first just got he's new eye maybe, before he tries to kill himself. But I've never seen Hijiri as a "hider", for lack of a better word, even when he's TOLD to hide for he's own safety and that of Kazusa's he still didn't hide. Not unless one was to look at he's character at a completely different angle and surmise him as someone who's cheer and determination compensates a weakness, and masks it.
Oh yea, btw, good poem, ^^;; I think I ranted there, the rhythm as well is also very good.
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