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| Chazmy |
Mur/Tsu fan-fiction here!For all your Mur/ Tsu obsession and sense I don't see much of them around I am going to post some of my fiction here
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| Chazmy |
Title: No Return to Innocence
Rated: NC-17 Summary: What happens after Tsuzuki loses the poker bet and Hisoka is not there to save him? boy x boy yaoi extremely voilent dark sexual themes! { Complete } Link Here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3206238/1/No_Return_to_Innocence |
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| Terrenea |
Seems to be a wonderful story! <3
I don't think there is one mur/tsu-fan that ISN'T angry on Hisoka for getting in the way there.. Muraki won, fare and square! *pouts* You should check up some things in ch. 1 though, hope you don't mind *whimper*: -His violent eyes closed (you mean 'violet eyes', ne?) -” Not quiet yet my beautiful prize.” ('quite') -he seen that he was now ('sees', I think) -his tormenter ('tormentor')(same again later on) -his prizes anger ('prize's') -It Amused him -Muraki Licked the drip -” How dose it taste?” ('does') -hands grab ahold ('a hold') -Doctors strengh ('Doctor's') -tare into his belove ('tear into'..?)('beloved') -seliva and blood ('saliva') -Especial the ('Especially') - disguest ('disgust') -Muraki sits quitly ('quietly') -hopes of agreeing (think 'agreement' is more suitable) -what he plained ('planed') -in the bed ('into the bed' ?) -belove’s body ('beloved's')(some more later on) -Muraki rubes ('rubs') -his toys ('toy's') -body seemes ('seems') -now dosen’t ('doesn't') -gently rubed ('rubbed') -to lossen ('losen' but feels wrong to use that word..) + the punctuations |
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| Chazmy |
No, I don't mind at all Thank You. I'm so bad with grammer and spelling 
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| Terrenea |
I'm like that myself with my own work. ^^
And once again; nice story! 
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| Chazmy |
Thank You again! I do have the sequel
Title: Forever Mine Rated: NC-17 Summary:The Sequel to No Return to Innocence!THE FINAL CHAPTER!Sometimes drowning your sorrow in alcohol just isn't enough! Warning story contains:sexual themes and violence! not for the weak! { Complete } Link Here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3244036/1/Forever_Mine 
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| Chazmy |
Title: A Dance with the Devil
Pairing: Tsuzuki/ Muraki Gene: Drama/ Romance / Humor / Angst . Rating: Nc-17 for later 'Lemon' scene's Description: When things go terribly wrong in The Ministry of Hades. Tatsumi comes up with a brilliant idea on how to solve it. Little did they know that they would be auctioned off. What could a simple dance really lead in to. Statues: in progress Chapter 3 part 2 is up. Dancing lessons 101 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3613053/1/A_Dance_with_the_Devil |
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| Editor |
Quite slow today, only read first two chapters of "No Return to Innocence", I love melting rose, melting rose is very creative, I know that is the weirdest thing to picK out with all that mind fucking, *andjustplainfucking* going on, but, melting roses!! Dude!
Very, very dark, especially Tsuzuki's pain at the end and Muraki's obsession and lust for Tsuzuki's body, it came across very explicitly *anddamnrightcrepily* well, especially since you wrote a lot of the passion from Muraki's point of view. I liked Tsuzuki's few moments of weakness of considering Muraki's strange attachment to he's looks....*cough* you know...right before Muraki *cough* has he's way with him *cough*.....aaaaaaaanyway, looking forward to reading more!! I haven't read much MurTsu fic, (though I have written one O.o) so it was really fun to get into yours today. I'll probably swing between commenting here and on ffn. And keep it up!! |
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| Chazmy |
OH which one? what is it called? I want to read it
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| Editor |
No Return to Innocence
I've been discussing more than reading today so when I next get the chance I'm gonna find out what happens. |
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| Chazmy |
Oh......
*blush* That was one of my blonde moment's.... I thought you said you wrote a story based on Muraki & Tsuzuki. |
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| Editor |
I'm not even blonde and I just had a blond moment there not that blonds are dumb or anything because Watari is blond and he's not stupid though stupidity isn't always bad since...uh...yeah.
Anyway, its not a real MurakixTsuzuki story, it's just lightly implied, really lightly implied, but it's short and stuff, it's called: The wish that reuined everything If your interested. |
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| Chazmy |
VERY XD
do you have a link? |
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| Editor |
lol yep sure, its already in the post, just hover your arrow over the words: "The wish that reuined everything", it should be showing up as orange on your screen. |
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| Chazmy |
It wont let me in
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| Jani_chan |
Don't worry, you can't get any more blond than me, but omfg!!! Great ficcies! | ||
| Editor |
Read some more of no return to innocence!! Great smut!!! I mean >.< fic.....great.....fic...*cough* I love the characters interaction ^^;;; I don't quite know whether to egg Muraki on or pray for poor Tsuzuki, I sorta saw the sequel and read some of that too (oops), but you're passion for the couple comes through strongly in your writing and draws the reader in, the only thing I'd say is watch your tenses, shifting between past and present something I do myself, other than that, great fic's!! Keep writing!
There's mine, it's not very good and would be a waste of time to read, *shrugs* but it's very short anyway. Well see ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3188036/1/The_wish_that_ruined_everything |
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| Chazmy |
That was the very first story I have ever written for ff.net. I am terrible when it comes to grammar and spelling.
I just snagged up a beta-reader not to long ago to help with my problem and am working on revisions for the old stories I have too, very slowly. I read back into some of my stories and compare them to the ones I have now and I am like WOW! My writing skills have somewhat improved. Thank you for all the great encouragements too you guys
So going to read that fic right now Coco! |
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| Chazmy |
Just for the hoildays. An old fic here
Title:There Must of Been Something in the Eggnog Rated: NC-17 Summary: A Tsuzuki and Muraki Christmas! TsuxMur pairing. Small hint of TatXWat pairing. { Complete } Link Here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/32994...t_Of_Been_Something_In_The_Eggnog |
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| Chazmy |
I have an ansty no-con one here!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Title: The Brake of Pure Innocence Pairing: Tsuzuki/ Muraki Gene: Hurt/ Angst/ Non-Con . Rating: Nc-17 for theme. Description: A dark fic. { Done for a kink memo request] Statues: in progress http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3879136/1/The_Brake_of_Pure_Innocence |
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