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| jacinthe86 |
my first fan fiction everthis is my first ever fanfiction,its being posted here....well only one part, the rest is still being written.pls comment, i welcome constructive critisism no flamming please. i take all advice i can get to improve. Thank you. Arigato. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3123577/1/ |
| darkmoon13 |
it was interesting. there was some mistakes here and there but nothing bad. i can't wait to read the rest.^^ |
| admin |
Only advice I have to give is just read over and check it and strech it out a little bit between Hisoka's angsting and Murakis kidnapping-it all happened a bit fast. But for a first fic not that is not bad at all. I like your writting style, and I'm interested to see where this goes and what's going to happen to Hisoka. Please keep writing! |
| jacinthe86 |
thanks for the reviews and comments.  i will try to draw it out. hopefully you will enjoy the next few chapters as much as the first.
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