Jani_chan
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Passion (Muraki)Passion’s color is red.
Passion’s form is you.
I fell on love with you and thought I could hold myself away, but now that I’ve been so close all I want is to be with you, bringing our bodies to the peak of pleasure falling from the edge of no return.
You bring my mind into throws of passion that I’d never imagined. Now that passion did not want to end. Do the same to my body. Stay by my side and warm my chill flesh with the heat of your own.
Passion’s color is red.
Passion’s form is us.
((not as good as my other ones, but it came to me so I figured I'd write it down^^; )
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your_demonic_angel
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Interesting to say the least. You most definantly can't say it's not Muraki.
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laustic
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I can't even find the words to say how much this sounds like Muraki. He definitely is one twisted romantic.
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Jani_chan
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lol thank youuu <3
I did this at random and can't really remember what I was thinking..... still think it's not as good as the other ones though.
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laustic
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Sometimes the best writing comes from us when we're not thinking clearly. At least that's what I believe
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Chazmy
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I like this. It describes Muraki very well. because to me Muraki is passion. { even though he is a bit crazy at times } ^_^
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Editor
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I agree with everyone here. I can only write when I'm not thinking, when it just comes, I envy people who can just write what they want. But back on topic, yeah, that is Muraki especially the last verse, what did he's spirit posess you or something. >.< he's trying to contact Tsu through the forums yikes! No, it's a good poem--it's not your fault Muraki's a pyschopathtic homocidal twistedly passionate sociopath. O.o
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