Jani_chan
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PleaseI see you
Sitting all alone,
Not letting anyone near,
Never showing any fear.
You're fighting me
With everything you have.
Not letting me close.
Please,
Let me help you.
I want to be your friend.
I want to show you
That you are special
In your own way.
As everyone is,
And I am too.
Of course I hate me
For things I can't change.
For things in the past.
But you have to know
That I care for you
And never want to let you go.
Please...
Let me help you...
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Okay, due to the fact that I was near incoharent with tears last night while I was writing this I guess I forgot to tell the pairing here. It's kinda obvious to me, but that's just me. It's Tsuzuki talking to Hisoka. Please tell me what you think.
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Paurie
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Awww... Poor Tsu-chan. D: *feels like kicking Hisoka* >.>
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laustic
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Aw, that's so sad. Poor Tsuzuki. It would be cool if you wrote a companion piece to this in Hisoka's pov.
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admin
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*Huggles* aww why the tears!
Poor Tsu, yeah I guessed who it was. Very in character the thoughts, I agree with laustic, it'd be cool if you did an Hisoka one too.
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Jani_chan
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okies then, I'll keep it here, seeing as I'd title it the same thing anyways :p
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Don't see me
Leave me alone,
Don't come near me.
Please don't see my fear.
I don't want to fight,
But I am all I have.
Don't come close.
Please,
I don't need your help
I don't need friends.
I can do this
All on my own,
in my own way.
That's all I want.
I hate myself,
This curse I can't lift.
It tells me you care,
And I know.
But I never want to have
To let you go.
Please...
Don't help me...
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laustic
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That's great and you really hit the nail with this characterization. This sounds so like Hisoka. Great job 
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Paurie
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That was good, too. :3 <3 (Something about Tsuzuki's makes me "must huggle him D:" though. XD Poor lil puppy X'3)
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Jani_chan
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sankyuu (_ _) I like these ones too. I tried to make it seem like the two were thinking similarly and one was answering the other's thoughts without actually hearing them. Or maybe he did... this is Hisoka... but.... yeah :p
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