Archive for Yami Forums A Yami no Matsuei forum where fans of the show can mingle and discuss it.
|
Jani_chan
|
Prince's Fairytale (pg13)Spur of the moment think I typed out when I was half asleep cuz I'd just woken up. There's some Muraki, but not much. Hope you like! <3
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
There once was a prince in a faraway land with eyes of emerald and jade. His hair was like strands of silken wheat and his skin the purest of creams. Every day the prince smiled, holding his thoughts to himself as he'd been taught, but every night he cried, wishing for a knight to come along who would capture his heart and cradle his body in strong arms. For many years he waited, until he was almost ready to give up. But one day, a knight rode into his kingdom and made way for his castle, a shadow on an inky steed. Folks who saw said that amethysts hid beneath the hooded cloak. The prince was intreagued, but hid himself to the castle, as he always had, his father commanding him to stay away. The knight tried to make his peace with the king, wishing for entry to the castle, but the ruler of the realm sent him away, declaring that no man, woman, or child with eyes so inhuman would go near his courts. The knight bowed olitely, hiding his hurt, then hid off in the darkest of forests, believing that there was no other place he could go, a man so inhuman as himself. But the prince had seen him and didn't think he was inhuman at all. In fact, he'd thought that the knight was the most amazing human he'd ever seen. Could he be an angel?
That night, setting off, away from the castle, the prince set himself on a search for the knight, wishing to meet him. He made it to the sakura grove. Rows upon rows of cherry trees, blossoming in the damp night air. The There were acres and acres of trees on his way to the forest and when he was almost to the dark forest, he decided to sit down, feeling rather tired. He spotted a rather large cherry tree off to the side, and made his way to it. But when he got there, he wished he hadn't.
Through the clouds, the moon shone as bright as day and stained the world in crimson. The prince's eyes widened as he saw a man there, cloaked in white and raising a daggar into the air. It was bloodied already and the prince knew he should make haste away from here, but it was as though a sudden snow had come up and frozen him in place. He let out a cry of surprise before he could even think about what he was doing and fell back, hitting the ground on his rear. The man turned and looked at him, dropping to the ground what seemed to be a woman's body. Cold eyes of shining silver met his, glittering like a child with a new toy. There was no inquiry from the man of the boy's purpose, but the look in those crystaline light eyes told the boy that he now belonged to this man. A doll with no way to run or break free. He was lifted and pressed against the cherry tree closest, losing his air between the hard body of the pure white man and the tree trunk. He gripped the cloak, trying fruitlessly to break free, but to no avail. The buttins on his shirt were popped off and his eyes widened in surprise. He slapped the man, then saw his mistake as he was grabbed by the throat. He closed his eyes, knowing he wasn't strong enough to fight, though his hands gripped at the man's arm automatically. He waited to be struck down, to leave his own corpse beneath the cherry tree, but to his great surprise, he was dropped.
The man had let go of him and pulled away, an arrow sprouting from his shoulder. He pulled it free of himself and pressed his hand over the wound, staring into the dark forest to see what had attacked him. Two amethyst eyes glowed brightly as the knight walked out, carrying a bow and quiver. The prince almost cried for joy at seeing the knight. The white cloaked man backed away, choosing to make his escape and live for another day. The knight began after him, but the prince halted him. He declared himself as prince and thanked the knight for saving him. The man looked away, hiding his eyes. The welcomed the thanks, telling the prince that it was his duty to protecct those in need. The prince smiled at him. He told him not to look away, for he knew the knight was human and wished for him to stay in the castle. The knight smiled at the prince, then bowed, thanking the boy for his kindness. Being so close to the man took the prince's breath away, though he didn't know why. He leaned closer, asking airily if the amethyst eyed man would serve him honorably and faithfully. They were so close. The knight caught a sakura petal from the air and touched it to the prince's lip. He stated with a smile that he swore fealty only to the prince. The boy was breathless, but smiled. He sensed that soon his life would take quite the turn... hopefully for the better.
~The End~
|
laustic
|
Oh my goodness, Jani_chan! This is so fantastic! I love your description (especially of Hisoka  ) I can't wait to read more. I'm just so excited about reading this.
|
Jani_chan
|
lol, you sound hyper. Glad you liked it^^
|
laustic
|
When it comes to Tsuzuki and Hisoka I'm always hyper ^^
|
Editor
|
| laustic wrote: | | When it comes to Tsuzuki and Hisoka I'm always hyper ^^ |
I concur.
But yes, I was suprised at how comfortably your writing fell into place writing this fic, it was lovely and smooth to read, and I was happy at the turn of events for Hisoka, the end made me smile, especially when Hisoka told Tsuzuki not to turn he's eyes away from him, fully aware that Tsuzuki was human and not inhuman as the king had declared. I only hope that things really do get better, the sakura petal to prince Hisoka's lips was an equally nice touch. Aw ^.^
|
Jani_chan
|
lol. when I came back here, I didn't even remember writing this story. But thank you for telling me what you think. I'm so glad that you like it^^ <feels loved <3<3<3<3<3
|
|
|
|