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| willag |
Seasons - TsuSokaHi everyone! First post, first fanfic! I'd like to get some feedback on it. Basically what you felt some of the strong points were of the story, and then what still needs to be worked upon. I'm really happy with the story, but there are some things that I feel could have been added or changed to make it even better. I'd like to hear what others think, and see if other people notice the same problems I do or are able to point out other things I've missed. Any constructive feedback would be helpful. Thank you!Title: Seasons Summary: Tsuzuki was the type of person who liked to use cryptic messages and symbolism when expressing his feelings. Pairing: TsuSoka Rating: R (strong language from Hisoka) Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3270965/1/ Have a great day! Thanks again! |
| Rhea-sama |
Eee welcome! *hugsquish* Be sure to make an introduction thiny in the.. introductions subforum so we can shower you with luff and affection x3
And I'm going to bed soon, but I will be sure to check this out later ^^b |