Waiting

Veleda · Waiting

I don't like Oriya very much. Apparently, my reaction to YnM characters I don't like is to write fanfic that makes them all sympathetic and understandable. I did it for Nagare too. Go figure.

Anyway, this is an Oriya-centric piece. Review and I will love you. (Unless that creeps you out, in which case I won't.)

Waiting: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3133487/1/

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Don't like Oriya O.O nonense I say!!

Anyway, brilliant story, very tense feeling, for me anyway, Oriya waiting and the sense of futility and denial the whole story carries. The whole time line and how the start and end sentences are repeated-very punctuating, kinda like poetry, if rather sad. The last line was especially good, "Muraki said he would not return. Muraki has not broken a promise to Oriya yet. Still, Oriya waits".

Thanks for sharing.

Any comments on how you came up with the idea for the story or your thoughts as you went along.